Me And My Father Comments

welcome to P H. i am now going to put this poem, with others, in my May 2019 Showcase, found in my list of P H poems. Thanks. bri :)

despite several " rough spots" , mentioned in my earlier comment, i will now put this in my May 2019 Showcase, a collection of PH poems to be found in my list of PH poems. Thanks. bri :)

Several years passed since he breathed his last, Intense pain in my heartis not a thing of the past. beautiful and lovely expressions of deep love for your dearest Dad. very fine poem. dear poetess. thank u. tony

a few 'rough' spots re your English, but overall a tremendous poem, and story, with the (unhappy) surprise at the ending. to MyPoemList bri :)

Very poignant and touching poem which came from the poet’s soul.