Me, An Old House Comments

A very unique poem with deep meanings! 'Devoid of walls I still live on hoping my walls will rise again But hey what do I see? '

Inevitable transformation! ! ! !

A profound thought. I agree with Siddharth, a multilayered poem. But that is the WAY world goes on... the old yielding plave to the new. You will find a similar theme in my 'A Wish' but in a different context. I enjoyed reading your poem. CP

A multilayered poem. Full marks.10

More meaningful than what it seems to be.A deep feeling wrapped in poetic diction.A good poem

Good write, Ratna...symbolic...clever use of words in conveying your thoughts there...thanks...10

Like purging the old for the new