Wednesday, September 30, 2015

Me, An African Comments

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Do not look down on my countenance
Because I am African
I may be hard hit by circumstance
But I still believe ''I can''!
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Precious Mlambo
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2016

And from my identity I will not escape Because I was created through God's Son My true value is this vision of mine And through Christ's grace it will unfold.. Your great determination in your words is very powerful. do it as u really write. think of Obama , he should give all the africans a new vision. God bless you in all your endeavors. thank you. tony

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Kelly Kurt 30 September 2015

A wonderful, powerful poem, Precious. You are the diamond! Thanks for sharing

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Thabisile Mlambo 16 October 2015

thanks Kelly. I appreciate your comment

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 September 2015

'' My skin may be dark But my future is not ... My true value is this vision of mine '' great verse, Precious. Brava! Cheers and WELCOME!

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Thabisile Mlambo 17 December 2015

Thanks Fabrizio!

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Kim Barney 30 September 2015

Great poem. I love it. I beg to differ on just one small detail: You were not created by God's Son; you were created by God Himself. Keep writing more. Great picture, also. Is that you in the picture?

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Thabisile Mlambo 17 December 2015

Thanks Kim for the valuable comment. Noted. It is not me in the picture...cheers.

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