Annoying
Loud
Exciting
eXquisite
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Ahehe... CUTE! ! ! ^_^ this poem has a simple structure but who cares? the soul is much more important right? thanks! becaue of this poem, i'm able to know you better... -GanNi
Like many of your poems, you have very simple themes and very simple structures. That's ok, though. You have nice rhythm and a nice flow. Learn to improve your vocabulary and mature your ideas and you will be a fantastic writer someday.