Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Me Against The Universe Comments

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I have traveled
for more than a millennium
to the center of space
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Justin Tallman
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Jahan Zeb 30 November 2012

I know it will be in a different style. I know you'd be different. This was a delightful reading. The lines short...sometimes one word made your poem feel sweeter. I liked the rhythm and the freedom of your thought. You will explore more for you are fighting something more than any democracy or kingdom has ever fought. Loved it......

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