Thursday, July 6, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

On the floor they stand around my body
some not even sure that it was me
the hair styled the same
the clothes I put on before everyone came
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Stay out of my life
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Chris Chris 02 April 2013

Hopefully, better times have been found. I recognize this rut as I have dug myself out of similar. -some random guy

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Brian Dorn 12 July 2006

Michelle, vivid scene development and an interesting atmosphere... creative and distinct. Well done! Brian

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