Monday, February 29, 2016

Me? Comments

Rating: 4.2

Why must he look at me that way?
Doesn't he know it's rude to stare?
I'm nothing special, so why do they stare?
Did I do something?
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Rebecca Springsteen
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Ryson Dsouza 01 March 2016

Wonderful message... Doesn't he know it's rude to stare? It feels so awkward or uneasy for a girl.. Keep writing....10

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Rebecca Springsteen 01 March 2016

Yeah, I know right! Thanks again for reading :) -Rebecca

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Juan Olivarez 29 February 2016

Maybe it is you. maybe you are drop dead gorgeous. and not a bad poet either. keep em coming kiddo. good work.

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Rebecca Springsteen 29 February 2016

Awww! Thank you. :) Don't worry, I'll keep em coming.

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Barry Middleton 29 February 2016

It'd not you, it's them. Your second line is spot on. Staring at people is rude. They stare anyway, especially at females.

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Rebecca Springsteen 29 February 2016

Well, I'm happy you agree Barry. Thanks for reading! -Rebecca :)

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