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Stunning poem Lynette.. I liked it very much, the beginning of happiness is accepting ourselves and from there on everything is possible! Very well done HBH

Lynette, Such a thought provoking poem. I love how you write from the soul.. Very nicely done. My opinion is that your line 'longing to be free' is absolutely perfect, after all, isnt that what we are all doing? We all long to be free and once we accept ourselves for who and what we are........we will be. Such a nice poem. Sincerely, mary

Again a very thought provoking poem, especially for those who feel happy in chasing false/worldly dreams and are not able to enjoy and be thankful for what they already have. Very well written and beautiful choice of words.

loads of feeling in this poem. Thanks

Are you happy with the ending and with 'longing to be free'? Just asking. Another great poem. Love your sincerety and your presentation H