Tuesday, August 6, 2013

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My mind fills with fear,
No trust standing near.
Painful memories true,
They haunt and shatter through.
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Brenda Harper
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Leah Ross 13 April 2016

very well penned O so true loved this line you will never rid yourself of you

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Khairul Ahsan 20 March 2016

I was moved by the poignant picture of yourself you've painted in this poem. It touched me deeply. Thanks for sharing your thoughts of a particular moment so poetically. 'No, No-one will ever know, the pain in me that haunts me so. For evil stands so near, laughing at my tears.' - Eloquent reflection of miseries. 'You were the one who closed the door, and now that is, forever more' - Sigh!

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Brenda Harper

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