Tuesday, May 26, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Some days I'm on top of the world.
I'm a vibrant yellow,
Soaking up the smiles,
From every direction around me.
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Standing in the Silence of Your Pain
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hey... we all have our days... i like ths poem, i can easily relate... thanks for sharing. 10...you've earned again!

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Emily Oldham 30 May 2009

Original and beautiful........... thanks :) Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Sara Tehrani 26 May 2009

Best poem ive read on here so far... probably coz it makes sense and the choice of words is really good. Ive never heard the phrase 'paste on a smile' and i really like it, i like the use of complete new and original phrases.its got a lovely flow. was lovely to read :)

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