Wednesday, February 27, 2008

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i am me the one you know
as David you call me funny you
call me genius you call me
a gentlemen you call me names
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Melissa Northrup 02 April 2008

It seems like you enjoy writing in a stream of consciousness style. Then it seems like you took some ideas off the classics, such as e. e. cummings or William Carlos Williams. I don't quite know what to think of you. It seems like your themes only reflect a very American philosophy of the individual, and you also take a very modern/postmodern idea of love. I'll keep reading and see what I think.

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