Sunday, November 19, 2017

Mayhem At Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Veil of golden rays over the vista
Rousing fresh cuckoo call, from arboreta
night bloom attar held breezy spa
stunning dawn motif, hoisted spirits by far
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A clear and heartfelt picture on nature, hunting, victim with fear has been painted in this poem by u dear Liyanage sir. Thanks for presentation.10

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 03 December 2017

Thank you Kumar for reading my poems and commenting.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

Panicked mates, flocked up on bough while quivering in terror caught huff Beautiful poem shared. 10+++ for it.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 November 2017

Thank you Subhas for the comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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