Sunday, January 28, 2007

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Pitch black, the place is disorienting
A sonorous voice booms, sending the earth a-shaking
It gives radiance to the place
Stark bewilderment on my face.
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Hime Hiroda
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Joscephine Gomez 29 April 2007

Excellent! Your command of the language (of poetry) is admirable and your feelings/thoughts, well-expressed. I'm intrigued by the title. What's the story behind the title?

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