Wednesday, January 7, 2009

Maybe The Only Poem I'Ll Ever Write About A Girl Comments

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I’m always getting love drunk
Off silly girls’
Intoxicating fumes
My stomach can’t handle you
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Dan Walters
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Chloe Young 30 July 2009

i think this is amazing. 'my stomach can't handle you' - so many meanings. <3 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 July 2009

..nice idea and with thrill...when will be that piece for a girl be posted.. a heart to say in due time lovely write...Keep on writing... You write so well and with impact... ..Please do feel free to read mine 'I'd never thought..I'd fall In Love.. the first love poem i wrote for a man...lol thanks 10++++ lovelots, Maia

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 February 2009

It appears the writer started a poem about girls, but he never really actually wrote one. I am still waiting to read one. This isn't it. GW62

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