Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Maybe Someday... Comments

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Maybe someday I'll love you again,
Then maybe I won't...

My laughs and my smiles. My frowns and my tears...
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Lushan Massri
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 November 2009

Love is always confusing and conflicting, especially in teen age. But keep on writing. It will give you more and more clarity about life and love. You have good probabilities of poetry. Best Wishes Naseer

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

Sure maybe someday good write

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Silent Speaker 24 November 2009

I love the way you show your conflict in this poem. its subtle yet its obvious. another great one.

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