Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Maybe, One Day. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Filled me with hope
Just to tear me apart

The words she spoke
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Jon Hark
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Duncan Wyllie 11 November 2008

There is feeling in this piece, some poems go on for a long time, and yet still find it difficult to achieve what you have in just a few lines WELL DONE Love duncan X

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very true and thoughtful great job.. Krista

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