Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Maybe, It's Just A Dream Comments

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My mind is haunted by your shadows
I can't get rid of them
I still love you and I can't deny it
As the sun rays fall on my skin
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Rijad Islamovic
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Jessica Fay Harding 20 May 2010

There are several emotive images that made me question if this poem was a reflection of reality. The reference to 'moonshine' and the fact that you are 'haunted by your shadows' suggests that this is a dream because of the strong connotations the images have with the night and therefore imaginings. Overall this is a fluent poem which reflects your growing uncertainty.7/10

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