Saturday, July 19, 2008

Maybe I Miss You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think this as I step
out of the downpour into my body, a trough
where this yearning collects and solidifies
into something like a plea, an Eloi, Eloi stuck
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Indigo Hawkins
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Bill Thomas 02 August 2008

Stunning, Indigo, you've just given me an image to roll around the mouth & mind all day. Thank you.

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Tai Chi Italy 19 July 2008

This is a little bit better than nice my dear Indigo! this is a stunningly beautiful expression of missing someone you love! A diamond in the coal,10 from Tai

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William Rain Mountain 19 July 2008

Nice stuff! Keep it up..

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