Monday, August 22, 2005
Maybe I Feel The Same Comments
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It seems you like nothing I do,
you turn your nose up at my interests,
tell me that they're 'pointless'.
while I try to encourage you,
...
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7/25/2025 7:20:51 PM # 1.0.0
Rather than merely cataloguing events; use a few more metaphors and provide imagery for your feelings. Slow the moments down and let the reader linger on those images not merely events. I have a sense that you are able to progress, as the penultimate line hints at. Stick with it.