Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Maybe By- Me Comments

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no eye wont be afraid
just as long...
as you stand by me
eye called to leave you a message
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tom mc quade 16 June 2009

nicely done..very explosive senitments but you capture the dignity within certain emotional containment..feelings staying well within the perimeters they allow to express themselves..this is a excellent poem thruout..im certain to return to it again and again..thanks :)

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