Saturday, October 4, 2008

Maybe A Spirit Can Be Broken Comments

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Maybe a spirit can be broken
Sometimes I wish that I was dead
So many painful memories
Like rabid dogs inside my head
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Mistaken Identity Suicidal Tendancy
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Jessica Rosalie Smith 07 October 2008

wow. great job i LOVE the last line...your poems express so much emotion and there's a certain bitter undertone unique to your poems that screams suffering and hardship...keep it up =)

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Tia Maria 04 October 2008

When one is in this bottomless pit it is hard to believe you will ever claw your way out... all I know is keep believing, as long as it takes believe in your god given right to see the light and you will look back & be amazed at how strong you have become & that's survival :)

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Stacey Watts 04 October 2008

Such pain and emotion in this poem. You are commended by me on your bravery to write such things. You are extremely talented. I can feel the tears well up as I read this. Keep writing.

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