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Kong Yin, A dream of images full of meaning. The small things can mean so much. Dogs barking gave it a feeling activity and somehow a moving feeling in the air. The path of flagstone depicted that a person's soul or heart was searching - she, all in grey.................maybe seeking meaning.................great ending begging in shadows......I enjoyed Maybe very much. May I ask how this poem came to be? Blessings to you in your life and writing.....................Kathy

Very tranquil! Real dream like. KW

Stars are glimmering in a stream wonderfully with expressive emotion and moon is flickering on a far mountain. What an interesting imagery is drawn here in this marvelous poem really. Nicely penned.....10