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First there was a lightening dazing the eye
Next came a thunder threatening
With fear the earth skipped a spin
Merry skies laughed maliciously
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Masterly juggling the themes. A novel way. Ten dr. sakti
a very great theme.. very significant thoughts from you... very intelligible write... strong and with great impact.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia
The warm poem has taken off from ancient mystery, very nice...10... Tsira
my inquisitive memory hav detected here/in this site some powerful thinker, you are one of them! Compact........beautiful interpretation! 10+
A very original piece Sathya....I like the last stanza very much...You raise a really important question....
very well written...man has indeed learnt the wrong lesson right
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8/5/2025 1:54:58 PM # 1.0.0
A well penned write..I love most your last lines. My warm regards, Meggie