May We Always Be Comments

this poem is well written, i could feel your emotions in your words, i could feel your pain. your poem couldkinda paint a picture in muy mind of you and your lover saying goodbye. Goodbye means forever and i think that you shud never let her go, never give up and say goodbye. She may say it, bu if you lover her like your amazing words say, you Will Not give i n and say goodbye, for she is your love, your true love, your bride to be, your amazing half! :) this is just an anazing poem and just wanted to give you a tip. :)

Nice writeup...i also like the title..may we always be...kudos. Please u shud read my poem...my emotions betray me and A lullaby..thanks for sharing...+