Dancing with greenest
Of fresh-leaved dress,
The trees have awakened
Come lately, - - - shook
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very nice poem, written eloquently.you become lost whilst in reading
Wow! Very artfully portrayed the Incoming May though late but still feels pleasant. The ecology seems to have uplifted itself enchanting the surroundings.....10/10
Very Fresh Fay! Nice flow of words......love the tempo and imageries...! 10+
Such a celebration of flowing welcoming imagery for May's late arrival. The first two lines danced with me to find blossoms, petaling snow, a bridle show and so much more. How you made my heart sing with happiness Fay. Top marks! Karin Anderson
Lovely seasonal poem Fay, very much enjoyed. Descriptive and full of wonderment Steve
Beautiful vivid write Fay...I think nature is rapidly becoming your best theme...this is wonderful...Fi 10++++
Picturesque, vibrant and sunny - this fresh and lively poem leaves the reader's heart crammed with the sights and scents of Spring. S :)
Lovely poem about renewal that is bright and aerien.