May Night Comments
Already this night is a poem.
Heavy clouds overtake blue metaphors.
They convince the sky
its crystal heart must bleed.
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No words can describe the beauty of this poem. Truly poetical!
This May night has the exquisite beauty of a brilliant poem with analogies, similies and metaphors! Night Looking at the dark mirror bordered with stars, the princess sitting in her jaded palace, heavy clouds blurring the blue spaces...... all beautiful images! Enjoyed!
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8/7/2025 12:15:05 PM # 1.0.0
daniel, this poem charms me with many of its phrases: Already this night is a poem. Heavy clouds overtake blue metaphors. They convince the sky its crystal heart must bleed. Rain searches for its analogies. Night looks at herself in the black mirror bordered by a million stars. In a jade palace the Princess of Night watches her lover smile in a cloud of stars. you see i've copied almost the entire poem! however, i confess i find a firm grasp of the things described eludes me. but still... charming. glen