Wednesday, May 21, 2008

May I Still Miss You? Comments

Rating: 5.0

May I still miss you....even now...once in a while?
I promise that you'd never know.
I vowed my silence to you...forced to let you go.
My efforts of intentions sent.
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Cathleen Hodgkinson
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Susan Witman 14 January 2009

It's beautiful Cathleen but as a Christian I believe that death isn't the end. And our affections are not limited to those presently available, even when someone has gone ahead of us to the afterlife.

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~ Jon London ~ 29 May 2008

Hi Cathleen, You have created such a beautifully written piece..you paint the perfect words that bring this poem to life, remarkable poet.....stunning! ! ! *10* best wishes Jon

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James B. Earley 24 May 2008

'I promise that you'll never know' leaves me a bit confused. One would think you'd most certainly share this passionate message with the object of your intense affection! Best wishes.

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Michael K 22 May 2008

Never stop.. living from your heart. Never stop.. believing in fairy tales.. Never stop.. looking up at the moon... Never stop....

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Marvin Brato 21 May 2008

As if you feel hesitant and not sure of missing your love one Cathleen.... nevertheless, loving someone even if not letting him know it must be flowing like spring into the ocean! A 10.

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Dana Vespa 21 May 2008

I love that you are asking permission to miss them...very original. Great poem.

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Cathleen Hodgkinson

Cathleen Hodgkinson

New England, USA
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