Saturday, June 11, 2011

May I Have Unconditional Love With You. By Ray Subrata Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Beauty blazer buzzes,
She spreads her eye to the brim,
And walls me with her vigilance,
An ever attention she urges,
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Subrata Ray
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Full of depth and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Subrata Ray

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