May I am a butterfly,
Fly across the Pacific Ocean,
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I fully agree with my fellow poets below, you are very talented and this well penned and thought provoking poem is the proof! Keep inspiring the World my friend! 10+++ RDV from New York City...
I enjoyed reading this especially the last line: 'and watch you tenderly through the window' indeed such a tender poem
Such freedom! Liberty to come and go...... well done Love: D
A sublime start with a nice poem, Wong. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.