Saturday, May 22, 2010

May I Am A Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

May I am a butterfly,

Fly across the Pacific Ocean,
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Wong. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Saadat Tahir 23 July 2011

lovely feelings well expressed.. cheers :) sat

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Romeo Della Valle 21 July 2011

I fully agree with my fellow poets below, you are very talented and this well penned and thought provoking poem is the proof! Keep inspiring the World my friend! 10+++ RDV from New York City...

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lost soul 19 June 2011

I enjoyed reading this especially the last line: 'and watch you tenderly through the window' indeed such a tender poem

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Lekshmi Menon 16 June 2011

good work....really talented.....

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very nicely done.. you are butterfly.

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Such freedom! Liberty to come and go...... well done Love: D

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