Monday, February 4, 2008

May I...? Comments

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May I love you
in the moment
or must it be for ever?
May I kiss you
...
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Midnight Clarity
May
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This poem has beautiful rhythm, it reads so smoothly, quick but not too quick. I love the use of 'May I, ' the sense of giving and taking away, the irony. These lines had my eyes wide, May I ring your doorbell naked underneath the mink I bought you? Sweet read.

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What fantastically scribed irony.... and like the best ironies, with more than an iota of truth. t x

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