Wednesday, April 24, 2013

May Flowers; Never Like Before Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come, come watch,
Ahaa, look at those May flower trees,
What a beauty, freshness…...
You mesmerize me everyday
...
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Ambrosia Ambrosia
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Desert Life 29 April 2013

I can feel the flow of seasons..each words bringing me to a better higher plane. Keep penning. A big 10.

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Vinod Sharma 24 April 2013

Beautiful last stanza...

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