Another May Day arrives and the Farmer, he shudders,
In a deep moment of fear for everything he loves –
His cows and crops and his children, so very dear.
The old beech sways creakily in a passing wind
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I've seen a growth in you over the last couple of weeks that is amazing. I really loved this piece..you did an amazing job writing it...really. One suggestion however, the opening stanza seems to repeat itself a bit.. anyway, I loved it, well done.
Excellent, a glimps into the true Ireland that so many have forgotten. 10 out of 10 Ian