Friday, August 3, 2012

May Be It's My Last..... Comments

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May be its my last frown...
May be its my last tear to shed...
May be its my last urge to heal...
O friend just sit by me...
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Shivani Yadav
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Jazib Kamalvi 17 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Shivani Y. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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V P Mahur 09 February 2014

touching word. so sweet in tone.

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Eindaray Kyaw 01 September 2012

But I am sure this poem is not your last great one!

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Shihabudheen K J 01 September 2012

You said it shivani.we cannot judge ourselves or say if the next instant it comes is our end.you have emphasised the importance of heartfelt companionship by ur words.it would be indeed great if someone is ready to listen to us always whoever it is.

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Hans Vr 03 August 2012

We all need someone who can listen to us, really listen without judgement. Fantastic poem.

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