Mausoleum Comments
For you our love was neither strong nor real,
But I had both wild fears and odd hopes.
And now in my soul there's a mausoleum,
It's a remembrance of the joy we lost.
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Are you sure that's not a suicidal mission you are taking in the expedition of love? Never mind a good write. I want the dance of your pen to blaze with the fire of passion. Great one
Superb write and great metaphors and anastrophes used in the poem.I liked the theme very much.Not very easy topic to write for all.
For me your fake love oath was like a wedding ring.passionately poignant, heart ripping,10+++, thanks for sharing
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7/19/2025 12:40:18 PM # 1.0.0
How u employ and draw the analogy of d mausoleum is superb! So cheer up pal! Leave sadnes to poetry alone. Hope u read mine too.