aaj mausam ne karwat badli....
fizaon pe vi suroor sa chhaya hai...
kohre ki aagosh me dekho...
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dil chahe titli ban jaun.... udti firun main gulshan-gulshan.- - wondrful composition, you wish to fly in the sky because nature is too gracious and beautiful, nice work, thanks for sharing.
Wah wah kya khayal hai aur kya andaz hai.....Maza aagay Kavitaji.......LOVED IT...100 on 10 dil chahe titli ban jaun......................Kash yeh ho sakta udti firun main gulshan-gulshan.....Kya maza aata apne rang me rang lun sabko......... Wah wah chha jaaun main chaman-chaman.. Kya baat hai
waah...shayad aap ke janam lete hi aap ke parents koo pata chalgaya tha ki aap badi hokar kavi likhogee isee liye shayad aap ka nam kavitha rakha hai.... bahuth khoob mousam vaqiyee bada suhana hai..poem bhi.
hahahah thank u.... pta nhi shayad aisa hi kuchh hoga....