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Bahut khoob Nazm.10***** Arz kiya hai... kuch lines jo dil me aayi.. Milta hai sab ko ek sa (Yaksa) Koi utha leta hai Koi chook jata hai Koi afsos karta hai Koi khilkhilata hai Haath na aaye toh khatta Mil jaye toh meetha Mauka sab ko milta hai ek baar zaroor...

thanks for your ADMIRATION SOME ONLY ABUSE WHEN THEY ARE NOT MEMBERS THANK GOD PH DOES NOT PROMOTE EM ANY MORE SUCH RASCALS AS THEM amen

Main uski dastaras main na aaoon khuda kare. Jo be wafa kisi bhi trah na wafa kare. (Jazib Kamalvi)

JA SIR ON HIS RETURN HAS TRANSLATED IT NICE TRANSLATION Maukka toe milta hee rehtaa par usska phyada koee koee hee uttatta TIME AND TIDE WAIT FOR NO MAN neither you o woman and me oldy dry pan... waqt ki nazakat dekho samzhta hai koe koe aour meharbaan kabhee kabhee

एक बेहतरीन कविता एक बहुत बेहतरीन कवयित्री के द्वारा 1000 ++

It's a very good poem! Get inspiration from classical poets to increase your bar!