Friday, February 26, 2010

Mature Immaturity (C) 2-26-2010 Comments

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The three Fates aint cut the strings yet
So why I gotta end my youth and jump off of this swing set
I’m not in debt over a ring bet
So what is this hard life that nobody can bring wet
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Zahir Kijani
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Clarissa Dee 14 April 2010

Very truthful and interesting, I really like it! Great use of rhyming and childish yet mature (as I suppose the poem is meant to be) words make reading this delightful!

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