Looking at pictures I see happy and carefree faces.
There are girls holding hands and elbows perfectly placed.
I look and I am filled with envy.
I wish one of those girls was me..
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Commendable work, young lady... mellifluous structural movement throughout...excellent break-points as well as punctuational employment which all too many people don't seem to realize how significantly important this is in quilling free verse poetics...for it enables your audience to read your work as you would have recited it to them.
Keep that pen pumping ~FjR~
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Commendable work, young lady... mellifluous structural movement throughout...excellent break-points as well as punctuational employment which all too many people don't seem to realize how significantly important this is in quilling free verse poetics...for it enables your audience to read your work as you would have recited it to them. Keep that pen pumping ~FjR~