Friday, March 23, 2012

Matter In Existence Comments

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In the beginning there was only silence.
From nothingness began to appear the existence.
And from the form, the mortal was designed.
A form-spirit, invented by ideas.
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Besa Dede
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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

What a grand piece. I can envision the enfolding as you speak. Well crafted.

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Well Besa, on the ground of literature, you have your poetic liscence to play with words and language to suit your context. But on the ground of pure philosophy, there will be a lot to defend: for instance where you said, 'from nothingness began to appear existence', philosophers hold that nothing comes from nothing. It's splendid. A new version man's come to being. I love it.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 March 2012

I have read a few of your poems. The first sentence of this poem definitely shows your imaginary skill, so I try to visualize the silent world. Good. Thank you for the invitation..What is your opinion on my poem 'teen aged human'?

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R.k Das 26 March 2012

it has echoes of biblical lines, , , great immortal verse, , thanx

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