Matrimony Comments

true Indira, , , , , , , , , marriage's arent in heaven as much......... they are pretty much here in our day to day struggles, rigmaroles and trembles and screeches...yet the wheels roll on......with bit of oil...it all moves.............great poem as always...want you to invite to read ' transformed ' and 'edge of a dream ' in my poems....

Marriage isn't in heaven much On earth struggles are such Negotiations if finalise to hatch... ya relentless search for perfect match. age old problem... good write

And the poetry has its irony wee bit strongly brought out! keep writing!