Sunday, February 3, 2008

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Dawn-mist in laurel:
a hen blackbird tilts her head
dowsing for earthworms
while indoors my PaperMate
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Richard George
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Ronald Stroman 03 February 2008

my thoughts were thinkin' as i read your poem. take care.

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Michael Pruchnicki 03 February 2008

Neat comparison of a hen blackbird and a PaperMate, both dowsing for sustenance! Well done!

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Richard George

Richard George

Cheltenham, U.K.
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