Thursday, February 26, 2015

Matilda And Catilda Comments

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Once there was a girl named Matilda.
Her sister’s name was Catilda.
Catilda and Matilda did everything together.
They played on the swings and collected feathers.
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Bri Edwards 27 February 2015

A lovely story. hee-hee. i hope they were not Siamese twins (conjoined, that is) . if they were, Cat would have to drag Mat around, limp and dead, OR chop her sister's body off of hers, which could get complicated! ! ! now i'm not sure if you want criticism or not? ? ? bri :) p.s. if i found an ice cream cone [with ice cream in it i hope] on the road, i would look all around, and [if nobody was looking] i'd eat it.

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