Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Mathematics Of Love Is Me! Comments

Rating: 4.0

Do the Math, use a pen,
Take your time read this well,
You will see why you should consider me.
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that was cute...it was really fun to read good job...and i love math now..lol

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Adeiza A. 27 September 2009

I guess you're the sum of it all. Nice write (never liked maths though)

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Tom Fox 26 September 2009

cool, but i'm about to blow my boredom top with you...

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grace chan 25 September 2009

this poem is really interesting and. it has a lot of rythym with suspense and intensity there. its really good

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the rhythm of this is packed with excitement.. and life.. nice piece..

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Ravi A 25 September 2009

Add qualities and divide it by two. What is the answer? Once again, qualities would remain! This is my answer. Qualities cannot be half or one-quarter. Laughter cannot be half laughter. Kindness cannot be half kindness. Gratification cannot be half gratification. In our Bhagavat Geetha there is a verse which translated would mean this: - 'Out of completeness, if you take away that completeness, what whould remain? Again, completeness. There is no half completeness ('Poor-nasya poor-nam aadaya, poor-nam eva avashishyathe' meaning Poornasya = out of completeness, poornam = completeness, aadaya= substracted, eva= only, avashishyathe= will remain) . I liked the poem very much. Life can be looked from various angles and this is one such angle. Read my ' The mathematics of life' (page 6) .

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Fay Slimm 25 September 2009

No good with mathematics but thought this was very good - - liked the layout and the maths in it is clever......10 + + + Fay

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Obinna Eruchie 25 September 2009

Mathematics of adding what makes up good feelings and of subtracting what makes up bad feelings. Interesting.

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Dream Catcher 25 September 2009

I do not like maths but i totally loved this poem.Added it to my favourites.Its such a sweet one...I never knew there were so many ways to look at love! !

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

Take friendship subtract hardship is equals to me Take faithfulness plus the end of time is equals to me subtract, dishonesty subtract jealousy, subtract criminality equals me Add friend plus, lover plus Excellent soul mate equals to me Add adore plus care, plus cherish equals to me ------ great and lovely math of love and friendship.............Thanks....10/10+++++++++

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Liz Jumah 24 September 2009

captivating, fantastic and awesome.keep writing.

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Tsira Goge 24 September 2009

Take, milk plus, sugar, plus honey equals to me Passion, plus satisfaction, multiply 2 by gratification is equals to me. ..................................................................................................... I have thought that as a result we'll receive a honey pie, you only try will add nuts from my recipe... P. S. it's so original exercise, beautifully..10... Tsira

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 September 2009

Interesting... unique thoughts... only from Eyan...thoughts like this..lol 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Lady Grace 23 September 2009

my gosh ian, here you are again, , lolz..you know, this work is nice, , seems you are just making fun ha..well, mathematically...love doesn't need equation but it needs configuration, lolz..if 'you' equls 'me', how will it be solved? ....wait let x=you.........ok, this is the problem, , , solve it for me ian and send the answer to my inbox.....actually, am happy for this poem of yours..this is really your trade mark ian..cheers...

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Eyan Desir 22 September 2009

Well I love math's so I added mathematics to my poem Why not....hmmm Mathematics of love must be me! hahaha

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