Wednesday, May 17, 2023

Materialistic Prometheus Comments

Rating: 5.0

With eyes wide open
Leering the acoustical ceiling
Unable to communicate
Counting every hole in each tile
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D.N. Rebb
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M. Asim Nehal 07 June 2023

By the way you forgot to tick mark for comments and ratings in your latest poem 'Upset Heart' may be you got so much upset while writing it? ?

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D.N. Rebb 07 June 2023

Thanks I did miss that.

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M. Asim Nehal 07 June 2023

Profound poem, I liked it.5****

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S H 06 June 2023

To pick from mythology and extrapolate in modern times is a stupendous job, Amusing. All Stars

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Rajan T Renganathan 06 June 2023

Interesting piece. Good write.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 May 2023

This is beautifully inked. Loved reading. Thanks.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 May 2023

Great modern interpretation of the classic legendary tale! ! !

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