Saturday, February 4, 2006

Mateo Comments

Rating: 2.3

Mateo sat on a rusty bench
outside his local bar
and polished his old guitar
with a crumpled up tissue
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Sheila Knowles
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Poetry Hound 04 February 2006

I like the images in the final stanza. I also understand what you're saying about the out-of-tune guitar, and I sort of liked that but I was distracted by my antipathy towards untuned instruments. Nails on a chalkboard.

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