Monday, December 10, 2012

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Silence stretches between us,
his hands and eyes locked
under the table
texting his mates.
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Lucienne Kim Flavell
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Tajudeen Shah 09 January 2013

i think i started off reading your verses from here. would love to explore if at all new sharp posts up. God bless. rgds taj shah

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Luscious Larry 31 December 2012

I loved it. (I wasn't laughing though like some of the others) A bit sad really.

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Paul Brookes 29 December 2012

So funny still laughing...........................Thanks for sharing

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Kanav Justa 21 December 2012

hahahha, , , , , you are good, , , , , nice humor, , ,

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Bri Edwards 11 December 2012

Lucienne, i am privileged to be the first to comment on this. i laughed OUT LOUD at the line about him talking to your chest. sorry. i guess i'm insensitive to the situation. i then had to explain to my wife that it was NOT one of my poems that made me laugh. please send the meal bill to me and i will gladly pay it. if i were not single i would take you to dinner. bri edwards...... and i WOULD pay.

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