Friday, July 24, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Match Maker- Monsoon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.4

His curly hair wet, drip
After a shower from the skies;
Takes shelter under a bridge.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

Ek barsaath ki raat, is everyone's dream, , , , , , , , , , , expecting a beautiful girl knocking the door at midnight fully drenched in rain, the guy is all alone at home, offers some tea..........then the story goes on..........Mamtaji, you capture the deepst corners of common hearts.

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 July 2009

This is lovely, indeed... first stanza is sweet.. and i feel there is some mysterious element here tooo.. i mean i dont know.. i felt that way.. and i liked this one very much indeed.. short but very entertaining narrative.. wtih loves shan

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Anjali Sinha 30 July 2009

yeh so very true that same happens when writing poems too one gets into a romantic mood hearing the pitter patter on the roof lol! ! ! ! ! -10 anjali

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premji premji 27 July 2009

moon...zone....monsoon...........a matter of love.........

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Kesav Easwaran 24 July 2009

nice to read, Mamta...'lifts' up my spirit this morning...coffee or not...thanks...10

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Rakesh Bedi 24 July 2009

A nice one, mamta! Monsoons charge the atmosphere with romance.

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monsson seem to have made the match...lovely and romantic...pls read my 'a life taken by many' - karna

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rago rago 24 July 2009

is lift for.......... match made.....................

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