Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Masturbation. Comments

Rating: 4.3

There are times when you simply
cannot do anything.

You lay there in Medusa’s
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Mary X
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David Gerardino 17 September 2006

OK, IM THINKING ANNE SEXTAN, , , , , STILL A NICE POEM...

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Goldy Locks 16 September 2006

i like endings that take you by surprise. are raw. and fitting to a well-voiced piece.

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Royness (*~*) 12 September 2006

Good poem mary - the medusa image is particularly strong

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Royness (*~*) 12 September 2006

Good poem mary - the medusa image is particularly strong

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Royness (*~*) 12 September 2006

Good poem mary - the medusa image is particularly strong

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William Jackson 05 September 2006

Stimulating poem. I like all the lines, but I especially like the lines: There are times when you simply cannot do anything. You lay there in Medusa’s ugly vision, set in granite, with nothing apart from the breast you are touching.

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Mary X

Mary X

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