Friday, March 13, 2015

Masters Of The Universe Comments

Rating: 4.3

Looking for happiness,
Secretly, beyond the trauma of birth,
Seeking in Space,
A little faith,
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Sandra Feldman
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Leah Ayliffe 16 March 2015

This is a gorgeously constructed poem Sandra! I love love love the content within and the words are beautiful power. I related to the poem as a whole, but I particularly enjoyed these lines: Answers slide into dark caves, Are distorted and carried away, By human waves, Buried into secret graves, So that ignorance and manipulation Can prevail, For clarity and liberty, To always Fail!

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Bill Cantrell 14 March 2015

A master poem indeed, the first seven lines are a perfect set up for how the poem changes flow. Another wonderful poem Sandra!

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