Masterpiece - Under Design Comments

Very deep poem I, m not big on repeating what the poet said but more so the feelings which vibrate in this piece, amen +++++10 regards

but i can see here that you wrote it good

A very thoughtful piece, you have a keen sense for subtleties.you have perfectly captured the relationship between the painter and the subject, how the subject feels deconstructed in the process of reconstruction, getting edgy, impatient as a kid who's been asked to sit steady...who doesn't understand the larger purpose at the begining.yet after the divine intervention she's guided to the right path and enlightened she wants to be filled completely with the light.....this poem is universal, divine, stimulating and smooth...a true Magnum Opus of a great artist...

Written well. An enlightening read. Thank you for sharing. -Rick